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Tuesday 28 June 2016

partly couldy

Partly Cloudy


Carefully the birds glided through the sky and dropped the bags. Watching the babies quietly walk inside there house’s. Flash dash! Carefully they picked up the babies from the friendly cloud’s. Sadly the grey cloud can't live with the pink cloud’s. The grey cloud made a baby crocodile. A bird came to pick up the baby crocodile but when he was going to grab it and it attacked him.
The next day he came back and slowly inched back from the cloud a little bit. A goat hit him in the stomach. The bird came back for another baby, it was a hedgehog and it poked him with the spikes.The bird came back again and he was terrified of what was coming next. He saw a pink cloud with cute baby puppies jumping around, so he flew to that cloud. The grey cloud was sad and started to cry. Then the bird came back with the bag and opened it. It was safety gear and he smiled.The bird asked for a baby and the baby was an electric eel that electrocuted him. But the bird smiled at him and the grey cloud was happy.

5 comments:

  1. Kia Ora My Name is Kura From Tautoro School I realy enjoyed your story about the partly couldy it was a very nice story Kia Ora

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  2. Thanks for commenting on my blog Kura.Bye Sky

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  3. Hi sky I love your work.

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    1. Thank you Waiorere.
      Bye Sky.

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  4. Talofa lava sky It's Isabella from may road school. I really love your story about partly cloudy. Also did you make up the story? I also recommend that you should also add in some speech is well! Thanks from Isabella!!!!

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