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Friday 25 May 2018

My creative writing

Kia Ora
This week we were focusing on creative writing. I chose a picture called Night Thieves from Pobble to write my story. I hope you enjoy my writing.



The Night Thieves
One afternoon soon before Bailey got home from school Lucy, Bailey's
mum looked in the cupboard and saw that there was not enough food for
tomorrow. So when Bailey got home Lucy told her that they needed to go
shopping and also buy some more cat food for Bailey’s cat Kiki.

It was actually late by the time the got into
the car and drove down the driveway.
Half way they had to stop at a traffic light,
suddenly Bailey screamed and started pointing at the road. All of a sudden
a little toy sized truck appeared out of nowhere, it seemed to be driving by
itself! Mike saw the truck pick up a silver chain that was sitting on the side
of the road. It looked like it was the chain from a Mother's Day present that
Mike had given Lucy. He put it inside a hatch that he had opened.
The truck turned and headed for the car when Mike beeped the horn and the
truck fell backwards.

Mike slowly got out of the car and picked it up the truck.
He opened the hatch and saw things a millionaire would have rings,
necklaces, watches and bracelets. He sat it in the boot and drove it to the
nearest police station and handed it in. Now every night the family go out
and see if there are any more night thieves as they call them……THE END

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sky, it's Jess
    I really like your creative writing because it has tension in it, and you have chosen great language. Bye

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