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Wednesday 30 August 2017

Senses at the beach.

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We have been learning about how to use the five senses: smell, feel, hear, taste and sight in our writing.

Senses at the beach
Smell: I can smell the salty sea air as I walked along the dry sand.
Feel: A cool breeze brushed against my cheeks.
Hear: The tree tops shush and whisper to each other.
See The crystal blue ocean has waves like tiny mountains.

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  1. Anonymous31 August 2017 at 09:49

    I like your sentence about the tree tops because it makes me imagine the shush noise.
    You need a colon after See on your last line.
    Ka kite ano.
    Abby

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